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This poem did not have anything artistic to it. It was more or an emotional rant than anything, and by the time I got down to the part about the ...

I agree that in ther beginning it appeared to me that you were going to rhyme and then changed your mind. Also, the poem, as a whole, seemed very scattered ...

This was bland and relatively cliche. I Let It Go In May, I'd Love To It One More Time, Those lines seemed rather awkward and a little forced. The poem ...

This was very well written and I understand how hard it is to make something sound impressive with such limited means and complicated rhyme pattern. All in all, under all ...

This was a fairly good poem, but it was repetitive and a bit cliche. I mean, it had the average "god is beautiful" and "the world is beautiful" but it ...

This is a very sweet poem that, while it was fair, did not blow me away. The first stanza is far by the best, and the rest of the stanza's ...

This has amazing potential. It is a bit crowded, in a sense - there are many words that sort of compress the meaning. But, all in all, I would not ...

I’m not underground Yet And you don’t seem to understand That it hurts too much to talk about it I’m not innocent I would be dead by now if I ...

This...wow. The imagery is beautiful. In a stabbing attempt at constructive critizism, I could say that you could try to make your point clearer, but this is pretty weak... Your ...

It’s dusk and the leaves are still falling from the sky The wind was rough today, bent trees swaying to commands It’s cold out I take in those sharp and ...

It grabs your wrists And twists and twists It makes up lies and rips up skies It kills and cries and tries and tries So desperately to hurt you I’ve ...

This is very good and well-written. It makes sense and it is very fluent. I love the poetic nature to it, and the whole thing about cannonballs and fishing hooks ...

This sounds very interesting and it was short, but well written. The character, on the other hand, I see conflicts with. She is already the typical, cliche gothic character. And, ...

Well, this was excruciatingly crude, but rated fairly for it. I don't...exactly...follow it. I get the whole part about taking a shit and fucking family members, but not much else. ...

Well, this is a very good poem, at first. It was well organized and probably more artistic then anything I've ever written. But, while the words in the parentheses were ...